Feb 19, 2013

Immortal!

Saurabh Chawla |
immortal soul poem by saurabh chawla
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Wandering in this world is sometimes tiring
At times I feel to continue, at times I think of retiring
The looks so sly, that pierces the heart down deep
At times I go slowly, at time I get ready for a leap
Immortal is the soul, very difficult to keep

These drops of perspiration, seem never to evaporate
The never ending lust, can somebody please aspirate?
Why it is when someone does anything is called a creep?
Dreaming a nightmare, I wish I haven't gone to sleep
Immortal is the soul, very difficult to keep

Walking down the path destined, no other option left
By choice, not chance any worries if I feel bereft
The aching night can't bestow the gift that I will keep
I assort with the dark, allowing it to steep
'Cause I know, immortal is the soul, very difficult to keep

16 comments:

  1. Very very fragile. You weave words so beautifully in verse.
    "'Cause I know, immortal is the soul, very difficult to keep "
    Cheers!!!

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  2. Delicate! Nice flow!!
    Loved it Saurabh:)

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    1. Thank you Amit Sir :) I am overwhelmed :)

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  3. porfound thoughts saurabh ! wonderfully penned :)

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    1. loved the sequel :) do check out my stories section too :)

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  5. Great!! Really adorable


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