Oct 11, 2013

A walk on the moon!

Saurabh Chawla |

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Distant to you, it may seem
But it’s closer than you think
See beyond your wildest dream
No, please avoid that blink

The courage you possess
And remain unaware about
As a knight in the game of chess
Charge ahead, don’t be in a doubt

Lying broken with dismay
The petty defeats make you stumble
These are a small price you pay
Stand up when you fall, don't bumble

Stay awake, stay alive
Cover up the burning wicks
Don't let the flame die
Build a wall with the iron bricks

I will be waiting for you
Hope you reach there soon
You will be out of the blue
Believe me, it will be like a walk on the moon!


22 comments:

  1. This is so wonderful! A great piece!

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    1. @Alok - Kabhi mere blog pe bhi comment kar diya karo :P

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    2. Haha :P yes Alok sir you should comment on her blog too! very bad! High five Saru :)

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  2. Brilliant poem on positive energy and human triumph:)

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  3. wonderful piece carries so much of hope. good one :)

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  4. A romantic AND an optimist, now that's something you don't see everyday :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Shefali for the appreciation :)

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  5. Sweet poem....say it to a girl and she will be all yours ;)

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  6. Quite an uplifting and motivating poem. Loved the verse with defeat and standing up again.

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    1. Thanks a lot Saru :) I really loved writing this one :)

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