Apr 21, 2013

The unknown shadow!

Saurabh Chawla |

unknown shadow poem by saurabh chawla
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Looking in the mirror so close
I see a reflection of the unknown
Leave me wondering always
Whether I am awake or in a doze

Like the moon eclipses the sun
It takes upon me when I am weak
Slowly transforming me to a state
That of a devil or some god in heaven

Losing control is the main factor
That takes away the natural prowess
Within me lives someone I guess
Willing to come up from hideout as a benefactor   

Persevering to this bizarre chain of events
I fear of losing the one I have most important
Sometimes I feel dejected, sometimes depraved
But this unknown shadow of a stranger prevents!

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12 comments:

  1. Beautiful verse fueled by a deep thought. The narration is spot on, so is the flow of words.

    Lovely lines these Saurabh..

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    1. thank you so much Deepak for the appreciation. Sometimes they come out straight from the heart.

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    1. thanks a ton. :) I am glad you liked it.

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  3. well expressed ... the unknown shadow of a stranger prevents .. amazing !!

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  4. Very intense Saurabh. First two verses are beautifully penned.

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    1. thank you so much Saru :) glad you liked it.

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  5. I see the reflection of the unknown. paradoxical yet beautiful.

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  6. Brilliant !
    Enjoyed reading it.. Unknown shadows r always thr !

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    1. Thank you Afshan! Ya even I also feel sometimes :)

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