Only heard the fact till now
Also, I read it somewhere
Unexpected was this to happen to me
Since that time I wonder how
I don't know, I can't say a word
I waited for this moment or not
I surmised myself with the truth that
Some words are better left unheard
People say that she will come one day
The sayings are messing up my mind
What has happened to me I can't explain
A dream of us together in front of me lay
Raining heavily, it was a dark wet night
She stood under cover of an edifice, all wet
For a miniscule second our eyes met
Yes, I confess it was love at first sight!
Nicely composed.
ReplyDeletethanks Arumugam :)
DeleteHi Saurabh,
ReplyDeleteIndeed, love at first sight very poignantly depicted in these words penned by you. Although such a type of love can be risky but it does come with its high moments when the couple immerse themselves in the company of each other.
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indeed you are right :) will surely check out your link :)
DeleteI also believe love happens at first site. Very nice post.
ReplyDeleteThanks Naddy :)
Deletebeautiflu poem . . very nicely penned :)
ReplyDelete* beautiful
ReplyDeleteThanks Maliny :)
Deletebeauty of a poem
ReplyDeletethanks John :)
DeleteVery beautiful :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Priyaa :)
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Deletenice one.. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Meera :)
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