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The craving!



The path to the finish, did it ever exist?
All the faces of life are unable to resist.
Walking on the roads, including the highways
It leads to nowhere, I even tried the sideways
The craving goes on and on, hiding somewhere

The hours ticking away, opening up layer by layer
 The tides have fallen deep; I want you to anchor the night
Capturing the blissful moments, coveted long for your sight
 The dreams can't be so shady, whispering in my ears
You were playing with the sand, forgetting all your fears
 The phase went so fast, I want you to shipwreck your fears
Standing by your side any time, I will wipe away your tears
 The craving goes on and on, hiding somewhere

I keep on holding them, as the wishes are never suffice! 
 The collusion between you and me, will it ever be settled?
Asked me to myself in the mirror, as I saw him feeling nettled
The reminiscence didn't last long because of the brevity, to you I adhere
The craving goes on and on, hiding somewhere

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  1. The opening lines are just awe-inspiring.

    The path to the finish, did it ever exist?
    All the facets of life, unable to resist.

    You have beautifully pictured the entire life irk.
    Kudos Sir!!!

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    1. Though I wrote this one in a haste, I was not sure how it will turn up. Thanks Surbhi. After your comment I think its right. I am glad you liked it :)

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  2. This is one of your best poem iv read till date...:)

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  3. Awesome Saurabh!!
    Loved the line "The dreams can't be so shady, whispering in my ears"...
    Could have endless possibilities to it.

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