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Kiss of the nature!


 
Standing at the peak, I was gazing far away
The reach to eternity, holding my body from sway
I heard only once that its heaven out there
Now I was standing, to it I was left adhere

The spine chilling wind slapped on my face
The ice as soft as cotton, I let it to embrace
The beauty is the only one that allures
Promising it is, with each step you will adore

Up above the sky was as blue as cobalt
So pure that even oceans were free from salt
Feeling myself which was lighter than ever
Looking in the eyes of it was my next endeavor

Loved being there will always miss the charm
Carving out my desires, it will cause no harm
So soothing was the touch, a beautiful gesture
I will never forget that kiss of the nature!

Comments

  1. The ending notes were lovely. Nature is truly mesmerizing and so are your words. :)
    Silly Smiles... Take you Miles :)

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  2. Nice composition. Picture adds beauty to the poetry.

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  3. Saurabh, This was indeed a wonderful poetry...the enchantment and the spirit of the nature is so well-captured in this poem.Kudos...
    Loved it!

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    1. thanks a lot Panchali :) I am so glad that you liked it :)

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  4. Vivid descriptions! Loved the narrative

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  5. The spine chilling wind slapped on my face,
    The ice as soft as cotton, I let it to embrace.--- The emotions of these lines must be the genesis of Snow fights... and walks on soft snowfall...
    I liked how beautifully you captured chilling nature and warm emotions in one...
    Kudos!!

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    1. thank you so much :) i am overwhelmed you liked it :)

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  6. chillness and warmth in one go.. a very beautiful depiction.. loved it.. nice picture too.. :-)

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    1. thanks a ton :) last week I was in J & K :) truly heaven on earth!

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