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Drifting apart
Screaming out loud
Shadows in the sun
Piercing the clouds

The beauty surreal
The touch serene
Lusting fire within
Doesn't seem to cease

The smoking ashes
Warming up the skin
Don't let it escape
Burning the desires

The sun is hidden
Beneath the charred clouds
The time is forcing
Shadows to come closer

The pelting of the rain
Letting dry velvet to wet
The two souls unite
This time no one could stop!
PS: The sentence used in the second line of last verse contains two opposites dry and wet as highlighted.

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
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  1. Ayushi Pratit KhareAugust 9, 2013 at 4:54 PM

    Nice poetry Saurabh...Very precise use of words...a good read... :)

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  2. kalpana solsiAugust 9, 2013 at 7:42 PM

    used the opposites very well. The last verse is powerful yet romantic.

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  3. Kajal KapurAugust 10, 2013 at 7:04 AM

    Ah Love!!

    I love anything to do with that emotion! This is a nice poem! Good luck!

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  4. Karan SampatAugust 11, 2013 at 12:27 AM

    nice write..loved it..:)

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  5. Afshan ShaikAugust 12, 2013 at 5:19 PM

    I still have to learn to write short poems
    Good one on the prompt !

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    1. Saurabh ChawlaAugust 12, 2013 at 5:30 PM

      Thanks Afshan :) Keep writing and cut the long poem short using words carefully and aptly, you will make it for sure :)

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  6. UnknownAugust 13, 2013 at 10:07 AM

    Amazing poem Saurabh. loved it completely... good take on the prompt too

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  7. AnonymousAugust 13, 2013 at 3:22 PM

    Nice poem, nice innovative use of the prompt

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  8. Privy TriflesAugust 13, 2013 at 11:44 PM

    Wow... truly a WOW attempt. Loved it!!

    Congrats <3

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  9. kebhariAugust 14, 2013 at 3:45 PM

    Very Perfectly expressed the drifting apart. Well Done.

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  10. Rajni RetheshAugust 15, 2013 at 4:41 PM

    Blossom of Love! How I understand that :)

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  11. Someone is SpecialAugust 17, 2013 at 1:28 AM

    Wow... This is beautiful Saurabh :) :) Keep writing.. If you want to explore more, stop by Blog-a-Ton

    Someone is Special

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  12. Saru SinghalAugust 17, 2013 at 7:16 PM

    Lovely poem and I loved the last verse, the use of antonyms in it.

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