When the sun goes down
And the black canopy rises
The emotions, the turmoil that sway
She whispers, take me away....
When from the hidden treasures
Only the coal is found
Burning all the flesh then in dismay
She whispers, take me away...
The daylight brings out delirium
Every night often she trades
When pain and agony is all that stay
She whispers, take me away...
The curiosity so aimless
All desires fading fast
Under the night she lay
And silently whispers, take me away...
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Her agony though is so immense but she expresses it in muted tones only adds to the beauty of the poem.Nice one Saurabh.
ReplyDeleteYes! Thanks a lot for reading Kalpana :)
Deletewell quoted.....good post....:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Priyashi :)
DeleteThe pain, the anguish! Great poem indeed!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Reema for reading :)
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