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Cute little girl!

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cute girl cartoon saurabh chawla
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A long time ago, maybe a decade
Or even earlier, I guess
Going to the school, the day was made
Trying really hard, but failed to impress
That cute little girl with a long braid
The smoothness which she never let fade
I was sitting at a seat directly behind her
Feeling so divine, with her hair my fingers played
I didn't care about anyone else, whatever they infer
I just liked that cute little girl with a long braid
The hair so soft, in rhythm they swayed
Even the silk can become brittle for a while
But the shine of her hair, as it is, it stayed
Something was in her, else she would not beguile
I realized now that I loved that cute little girl with a long braid!

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  1. RatMarch 25, 2013 at 3:14 PM

    beautifully expressed that sweet moment.. :-)

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  2. Uma AnandaneMarch 25, 2013 at 4:01 PM

    Very nice lines.Depicts a little girl perfectly :)

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    1. Saurabh ChawlaMarch 25, 2013 at 4:08 PM

      Thank you so much Uma :) I guess my guess in description is not going to be wasted :)

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  3. Jyoti MehtaMarch 26, 2013 at 1:28 PM

    awww so cute depiction ... loved the braid even.

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  4. Saru SinghalMarch 26, 2013 at 9:05 PM

    I really like the comparison you made with silk. Those lines stand out. Good luck Saurabh!

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  5. Hair Transplant Clinic UKMay 14, 2013 at 11:42 AM

    Interesting :-)

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  6. kalpana solsiMay 21, 2013 at 10:44 AM

    Even the silk cab become brittle for a while. Lovely.

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  7. Afshan ShaikJune 25, 2013 at 12:00 PM

    I could almost imagine that cute little girl with a smooth shiny mane :)
    Congrats on winning !

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  8. Namrata MahalingamAugust 12, 2013 at 6:19 PM

    Beautiful poem. Well expressed :)

    Congratulations :)

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