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The burning candle…

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the burning candle poem by saurabh chawla


Oblivious to you
It may seem
This heat in blue
Makes you gleam

The darkness fades
Slowly into the dawn
Rendering me helpless
Like a chess board’s pawn

I burn, I also cry
To show the way
Till I become dry
From night to day

Struggling the mayhem
I battle the storm
You fail to fathom
In cold, I keep you warm

You light two of them
When one wick can’t handle
Ultimately you will condemn
It’s tough for me, the burning candle…

PS: The color blue as mentioned refers here to the innermost part of the flame.
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  1. RatSeptember 19, 2013 at 12:01 PM

    good one.. :)

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  2. Saurabh ChawlaSeptember 19, 2013 at 12:54 PM

    Thanks :)

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  3. SachinSeptember 19, 2013 at 1:32 PM

    awesome one... specially i just loved this one
    Struggling the mayhem
    I battle the storm
    You fail to fathom
    In cold, I keep you warm

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  4. ViyomaSeptember 19, 2013 at 1:44 PM

    Superb lines, exp the last one - Ultimately you will condemn, its tough for me...

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    1. Saurabh ChawlaSeptember 19, 2013 at 2:33 PM

      Thanks Viyoma for reading :) Welcome to my blog :)

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 19, 2013 at 5:20 PM

    Simply beautiful and deep:)

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  6. Saru SinghalSeptember 19, 2013 at 6:26 PM

    It's the best poem who have written till date. I can connect with it, specially with 3rd and 4th verse. Ending is superb. Lage raho...and yes, you changed your template once again. Choose one and keep it for a long time. Many recognize your blog with the template you have, just a suggestion.

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    1. Saurabh ChawlaSeptember 20, 2013 at 12:14 PM

      Thanks a lot for the appreciation Saru :) Yes due to some reason I changed it again. Will choose one for sure and keep that for long time :) Thanks again for the motivation :)

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  7. kebhariSeptember 21, 2013 at 1:32 PM

    Simply awe inspiring

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  8. kalpana solsiSeptember 26, 2013 at 11:16 PM

    The darkness fades
    Slowly into the dawn
    Rendering me helpless
    Like a chess board’s pawn

    Loved these lines very much.

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  9. Jyotsna BhatiaNovember 10, 2013 at 8:24 PM

    Awesome it is ! <3

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