Oblivious to you
It may seem
This heat in blue
Makes you gleam
The darkness fades
Slowly into the dawn
Rendering me helpless
Like a chess board’s pawn
I burn, I also cry
To show the way
Till I become dry
From night to day
Struggling the mayhem
I battle the storm
You fail to fathom
In cold, I keep you warm
You light two of them
When one wick can’t handle
Ultimately you will condemn
It’s tough for me, the burning candle…
PS: The color blue as mentioned refers here to the innermost part of the flame.
beautiful
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
Deletegood one.. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Meera :)
Deleteawesome one... specially i just loved this one
ReplyDeleteStruggling the mayhem
I battle the storm
You fail to fathom
In cold, I keep you warm
Thanks Sachin :) welcome to my blog :)
DeleteSuperb lines, exp the last one - Ultimately you will condemn, its tough for me...
ReplyDeleteThanks Viyoma for reading :) Welcome to my blog :)
DeleteSimply beautiful and deep:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Vishal :)
DeleteIt's the best poem who have written till date. I can connect with it, specially with 3rd and 4th verse. Ending is superb. Lage raho...and yes, you changed your template once again. Choose one and keep it for a long time. Many recognize your blog with the template you have, just a suggestion.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for the appreciation Saru :) Yes due to some reason I changed it again. Will choose one for sure and keep that for long time :) Thanks again for the motivation :)
DeleteSimply awe inspiring
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
DeleteThe darkness fades
ReplyDeleteSlowly into the dawn
Rendering me helpless
Like a chess board’s pawn
Loved these lines very much.
Thanks a lot Kalpana for reading :)
DeleteAwesome it is ! <3
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Jyotsna :) glad you liked it :)
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